While we're Britpicking, can I just point out that there's one place in the story where you used "dollars" instead of "pounds" and one place where you used "cent" instead of "penny"?
That aside, though, I absolutely adore this fic. I was the person who posted the original prompt over in the meme, and this is so far above and beyond anything I could have dreamed of, it's fantastic. Funny, touching, uplifting, sexy, more funny; it really has everything. Thank you!
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Date: 2010-05-26 05:19 am (UTC)That aside, though, I absolutely adore this fic. I was the person who posted the original prompt over in the meme, and this is so far above and beyond anything I could have dreamed of, it's fantastic. Funny, touching, uplifting, sexy, more funny; it really has everything. Thank you!