I can't take credit for the concept - the idea of David and Nick being offered money to kiss for charity was the original prompt. All the crazy elaborations, of course, are my own. :)
I don't think I've ever seen anyone write David as the one comfortable with himself before
Now that you mention it, I don't know that I have either. That's interesting! I don't know why the David in my head works that way, but he does. :)
But at the same time you've managed to keep David's perspective and bias, so you can also see how David sees them as women.
:DDD I'm so glad you think so.
In conclusion, YAY! (and sorry for being two week late to comment.)
I actually love late comments! All comments are special in their own way, but late comments are cool because I'm no longer expecting any, you know what I mean?
Thanks again for your wonderful comment, and I'm so glad you liked my story!
Re: The afore-promised ridiculously long comment
I can't take credit for the concept - the idea of David and Nick being offered money to kiss for charity was the original prompt. All the crazy elaborations, of course, are my own. :)
I don't think I've ever seen anyone write David as the one comfortable with himself before
Now that you mention it, I don't know that I have either. That's interesting! I don't know why the David in my head works that way, but he does. :)
But at the same time you've managed to keep David's perspective and bias, so you can also see how David sees them as women.
:DDD I'm so glad you think so.
In conclusion, YAY! (and sorry for being two week late to comment.)
I actually love late comments! All comments are special in their own way, but late comments are cool because I'm no longer expecting any, you know what I mean?
Thanks again for your wonderful comment, and I'm so glad you liked my story!