This story is so :DDDDDDDDD The whole concept, the scene where they practice the night before, George dancing to Lady Gaga (at which point my brain shorted out with laughter), I <3 it so much.
I don't think I've ever seen anyone write David as the one comfortable with himself before, and ahhhhhh I really love it. The entire scene where George is mocking him and Nick and then just walks over and kisses him is fantastic in how matter-of-fact they are about all of it. There needs to be more of this.
The other thing that I REALLY SUPER LOVE is how you've written Sam and Miriam. Because you can see how really awesome and developed characters they are, they're not just one-dimensional wives in the story. But at the same time you've managed to keep David's perspective and bias, so you can also see how David sees them as women.
In conclusion, YAY! (and sorry for being two week late to comment.)
The afore-promised ridiculously long comment
I don't think I've ever seen anyone write David as the one comfortable with himself before, and ahhhhhh I really love it. The entire scene where George is mocking him and Nick and then just walks over and kisses him is fantastic in how matter-of-fact they are about all of it. There needs to be more of this.
The other thing that I REALLY SUPER LOVE is how you've written Sam and Miriam. Because you can see how really awesome and developed characters they are, they're not just one-dimensional wives in the story. But at the same time you've managed to keep David's perspective and bias, so you can also see how David sees them as women.
In conclusion, YAY! (and sorry for being two week late to comment.)