http://secretshipper.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] secretshipper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] zaubra 2010-05-25 10:01 pm (UTC)

I ENJOY!!!

Oh, I have waited. I have! And I need more!


Part of me is saying, however, that you got the characterisation of the Queen very badly wrong. She does not refer to herself as "we" or "us". It's "one". One does not pretend; One does not deny; One thinks. She does not refer to herself in third person but in archaic first person. I really do love this story, but my brain wouldn't shut up about that... Sorry

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