While we're Britpicking, can I just point out that there's one place in the story where you used "dollars" instead of "pounds" and one place where you used "cent" instead of "penny"?

That aside, though, I absolutely adore this fic. I was the person who posted the original prompt over in the meme, and this is so far above and beyond anything I could have dreamed of, it's fantastic. Funny, touching, uplifting, sexy, more funny; it really has everything. Thank you!